- Text "Crypt. Beware of Undeads." should be "Crypt. Beware of Undead."
- found secret in drainage facility, serpent bracer
- nice little puzzle in the drainage room, match the levers to drop the stone
- SE corner of level 2, stairs pillar halfway in wall corner, looks bad
- SE corner of level 2, secret wall comes up out of door arch, looks odd
- Comment - Jill "hours of walking and fighting.. to get to" should be ...
- level 1 SE library, skull and hat overlap, looks bad
- Description - Skull of Nyrnox, replace both - with ,
- Book - Machine "...in the enriched chamber" should be "...in the enrichment chamber"
- Book - Machine "Activate a low energy..." should be "Activating a low energy..."
- Sign "Checkpoint. Minimum 2 persons patrols mandatory." should be "...2 person patrols..." if they are pairs or "...2 persons patrolling..." if they are separate individuals
- Text "Reliquiary" should be "Reliquary" (also in Journal)
- Wow, that was a shock to have the ice shards!
- The three altars in the Reliquary face the wrong way, anything I put on them faces away from me
- found rune of Death, life stone teleports to life rune, beginning to see a pattern!
- found earth stone (but now I remember having a death stone, where did I lose it??)
- why are ice elemental and wyvern facing backwards in cages? Other monsters facing front there
- Description "Remains of .. a .. human ?" should be "Remains of ... a ... human?", plus the lines are various lengths, looks quite odd, could add better line breaks for the text.
- Skeef also can wear Jill's light armor without penalty. Maybe you can't take back light armor proficiency after someone has earned it? I guess that's maybe a livable "bug"
- Dream Nyrnox "Sure can't we wait..." should be "Are you sure we can't wait..."
- Dream (and elsewhere) all ? should not have a space before them, such as "help ?", should be help?"
- Dream Nyrnox "...strange guard some help ?" should be "...strange guard for some help?"
- Dream Nyrnox "Sure he do." should be "Sure he does."
- Dream Nyrnox "stimulate his attitude to investigations" - both cases of "investigations" should be "more investigation"
- Dream Nyrnox "we can't risk." should be "we can't risk it."
- Dream Nyrnox "Before he does," should be "Before he knows it,"
- Dream Nyrnox "executed" needs a .
- Dream Nyrnox "dissect alive people" is okay, but better is "dissect living people"
- Dream Nyrnox "don't kill'em" should be "don't kill 'em" (space before 'em)
- Comment "It was neither Conrad nor Nyrnox to murder the guard. On the other he wanted us dead" (can't remember exact words, disappeared too fast), should be "who murdered" instead of "to murder" and
should be "other hand", not just "other".
- Level 4, opening door just S of entry prints a "Y" to the console, annoying (also door N of entry as well)(also for guard toilet door)(guard rest area)((chief's bedroom)(etc!)
- Description skull of Konrad "synonims" should be "synonyms"
- Text "Guards use only." would be better "For guard use only." and "Guards relax area" might be better "Guard rest area."
- found secret in rest area, nice potions, bombs
- Note "Many problems arisen." should be "Many problems have arisen."
- Note "fallen down the ancient digs" maybe "fallen down to the ancient digs" or "in the ancient digs", unless the ancient digs are big holes, then original is fine
- Note "as a result of dynamite mines there." sounds like you mean the dynamite killed him maybe, not that they are mining for dynamite there. So should be "as a result of the dynamiting going on in the mines
there." or "as a result of dynamite activity there."
- Note "Afterward the key to my chest has been stolen and now..." should be "Afterward, the key to my chest was stolen, and now..."
- Note "access my goods and the key..." should be "access my goods or the key..."
- Description Pickaxe "first time I see one of these." should be "first time I've seen one of these."
1,3.....1,2,3.....2,3.....1
- Discovered sequence, tough secret, but fair enough I think.
- found secret in tunnel, brace fortitude
- "Throw junk here" pit doors work oddly, maybe should be button, or just have lever open and shut it normally?
- S side of West branch has oddly placed blocker, monsters can't come out but isn't logical
- If the tunnel hadn't caved in, the west branch would have a second entrance, seems odd
- nice secret in the poop disposal area, chitin armor
- spent FOREVER on level 5, extremely difficult area, finally made escape, blech
- found secret to turn off repeating fire blast
- in spider area, teleporter in front of plate armor doesn't have light
- figured out to drop an item onto mechanism plate from floor above, got secret and shaman staff, nice
- dream runes: earth, life, balance, death, ice, physicality, fire, spirituality, air
- killed spiders in death pit, got third relic
- placed relics, got ice stone, nice
- exploring ice realm, very cool
- HOLY CRAP, tentacle ambush, got my heart pounding!!!
- can't reach awesome armor? searched again the whole ice world, no more secret buttons, no way into armor back area with ice uggardian and key
- Talking Garth - can't talk to him! I ask What were you looking for in the ice plane? (should be no space in front of the ?), he just says "Bye." as if I clicked "Nothing, sorry"
- when recruiting Garth, I notice that he levels up only to same level as Jill, but has a lot less XP, because Jill was almost to next level. Jill has 35945/36757, but then Garth has only 26209/36757
- did rune order buttons, opened Barikule's tomb
- got Barikule Necklace (I think it should be "Barikule's Necklace")
- got Barikule's Neural Blade, very cool!
- looked around with goggles for a LONG time, nothing else to find
- entering gate building, exploring
- (never found solution to spider area in mine teleporters behind plate, never found way to other side to get skull, never found way to get spirit mirror pendant)
- put in skulls, got stone sword, heavy!
I totally need to do a 1.1 version