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AnnElfwind wrote:So, the way I understand it now, is Blaz thinks noone ever escaped because Yenica and Contar's fate is unknown, right?
By the way, does Tawmis know what happened to them, or is he in the dark too?
Oh, and I hope Blaz will not turn to the "dark side". :)
I just went back through the thread! I have indeed made an error (no surprise, since I don't keep notes :lol: and the segment in question was written in Aug 2012!)

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“So what is the son of Contar Stoneskull and Yennica Whitefeather doing as a slave in Namaer?” Silvertan asked, his slithering tongue flicking in and out, as if he could not wait to taste the answer on his scaled lips.

“Wait, -tic!-“ Blaz’tik suddenly exclaimed. “You’re the –tic!- son of Contar and Yennica?”

I sighed.

“I am,” I said, quietly.

“They’re the only ones said to –tic!- ever have escaped Grimrock over –tic!- twenty years ago!” Blaz’tik said excitedly, still gnawing on the raw crowern. “You must know –tic!- of the Orb of Zhandul? The one that –tic!- Sancsaron sought?”

There it was. The one thing the Mages had kidnapped me for. To pick my brain.

“I don’t know about the Orb,” I said, my voice edged with annoyance. “The Mages of Des … kidnapped me when I was only thirteen years old. And used magic to pick my brain apart, layer by layer, to see if my parents had ever mentioned it – and if I knew the Orb’s location buried in my subconscious. When they couldn’t find the answer, they knew they couldn’t just put me back after there had been such a wide search for me. They sold me into slavery in Namaer for some trivial spell components.” I turned to Silvertan, “So yes, I am the son of Contar and Yennica. And that is how I ended up a slave in Namaer.”

I could see it in Silvertan’s serpent like eyes. The answer was not what he had hoped. He had thought that I was a spoiled boy, who grew up in riches.

“They still seek you out,” Silvertan said. “Your parents.”

“I never went back,” I answered. “Between what the Mages did to me… to my mind… and then a life of slavery… Their son is dead.”

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So Blaz'tik actually is aware of their escape (which I clearly forgot!) and Tawmis has not gone back to his parents after he was abducted (that much I remembered).

So I will need to amend the story!
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Slumbering. Sleep.

Blaz’tik felt energized, and yet drained. He felt excited, yet fearful. Each emotion, each feeling, came like the tides Sunken Strait. Every time he closed his eyes, even for a second, he saw the swirling mist, then the slowly emerging gears, hundreds of them, the numbers, the letters, all scrolling before his eyes, rapid messages, too quick to read.

The voice had not talked to him, for what felt like days, but had probably only been hours.

Blaz’tik had drifted off to sleep standing up, when his eyes opened he felt different. He looked at his hands and the magic continued to crackle between his fingers. “What –tic!- is happening to me?” he said to no one in particular.

He had regretted getting separated from…

From?

He closed his eyes and tried to visualize who he had come down here with. There were others. He was certain of it.

A human?

Yes. A human. A human of some importance. What was his name?

His name was Tawmis! Yes! Tawmis. And he was the son of someone…

Suddenly Blaz’tik felt a shock through his body. The grey mist, the gears were back.

Blaz’tik gasped and looked around.

What was he thinking about a moment ago?

He stood for a moment, trying to recall what it was he had just been thinking about. After several moments, he simply shrugged and continued forward. “I must help the –tic!- Undying One if I am ever to get out of here.”


Elsewhere in Mount Grimrock…

Coy kneeled down and touched the ground, “Your mage friend is close. It looks like he was here not too long ago. But his movements – they’re not fluid. It looks like he’s … jolted when he walks. His steps are erratic.”

“What would cause that?” Tawmis asked.

“My guess?” Coy replied, twitching the whiskers on his nose. “Grimrock is getting the best of your mage friend. The magic is corrupting him.”

“How can that be?” Silvertan hissed.

“Has the mage friend ever told you about Grimrock?” Coy asked, standing up, wiping off his hands.

“Yes, that the entire mountain is alive,” Tawmis answered. “Magic courses through the entire mountain, like blood. That’s how the torches remain lit. That’s how everything got enlarged. That’s why there’s undead everywhere. He told us all of that.”

“Did he ever tell you about the Undying One?” Coy leaned back against the wall.

“He may have mentioned it,” Tawmis replied, folding his arms across his chest. “Even I have heard all the stories of some magical being that nearly destroyed the world and was imprisoned down here. It’s all nonsense.”

“But it’s not,” Coy said, looking much like his name sake. “I have seen it. It’s very much real. And I have seen what it does to magic users. It uses the mountain to vitalize the mages, makes them addicted, for lack of a better word, to the magic they feel down here – especially as they go deeper, get closer to the Undying One. So this way, the mages never want to leave. Then he slowly begins to drain the magic from the mages bodies, back into himself. He’s been doing this since he’s been cast down here.” Coy paused for a moment, “Your parents,” he pointed his thin, furry finger at Tawmis suddenly, “did not ‘escape’ from Grimrock. They were sent down here on a mission; a mission to try and stop the Undying One. The fabled Orb of Zhandul, staff of the mad mage Zhandul himself, that they had supposedly brought down here for ‘safe keeping’; that is the tale that is, as you would say, nonsense. The truth of the matter is they, along with their guardian, Mork the Minotaur, were escorting a mage academy dropout by the name of Sancsaron the Wry down to the Undying One to use the fabled Orb of Zhandul that they had helped Sancsaron locate. Sancsaron could not be trusted to do this alone, as he hungered for great power, and would have been easily corrupted by the Undying One. By the time they reached the Undying One, Sancsaron was too far gone – he turned on your parents. Mork died protecting them. Your father killed Sancsaron, and your mother shattered the Orb of Zhandul against the Undying One’s metallic prison. The resulting blast should have incinerated everyone in the room. It had barely damaged the Undying One’s prison, sending small fragments in different directions. The Orb was shattered, your parents alive, and the Undying One was still absorbing magic. Your parents retreated to the first floor again, and called out to the guard who tossed down a line to them and pulled them back out of this prison. Your parents came here to destroy the Undying One. They failed.”

Tawmis, with his hands still folded across his chest, scoffed. “How is it that you could possibly know all of this?”

“I’ve been down here a long time,” Coy replied. “A very, very long time. I’ve survived by moving through small tunnels and grates throughout Grimrock. I have waited for someone to come down here and destroy the Undying One. I believed that all of you were the key. At least I did until the mage was separated from us. Now I fear it may already be too late for him.”

“And now, us,” Coy finally added after a long moment.

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Tawmis Sanarius – Human (Son of Contar Stoneskull and Yennica Whitefeather) - Warrior
Taren Bloodhorn – Minotaur - Warrior
Blaz’tik – Insectoid - Mage
Silvertan – Lizardman - Rogue
Coy – Ratling from the Isle of Nex – Rogue
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Heh - found a way to fix my mistake with what's happening to Blaz'tik. If it's not immediately clear, it will be made so later. :)

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I hope you don't mind -

I ran the chapters you've posted here through my documentation toolchain for the fun of it. I removed the footnotes and had to do some search-n-replace to turn fancy quotes (and other special characters) into something multimarkdown understands.

Anyway. PDF, EPUB, and MOBI versions.

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I have to say, you fixed the plothole nicely. Though I still hope they can save Blaz before he's too far gone.
Coy's a well of information... Wonder what was his source apart from being in the dungeon for so long...
Amazing as always. :)
Can't wait for next chapter.
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Sol_HSA wrote:I hope you don't mind -
I ran the chapters you've posted here through my documentation toolchain for the fun of it. I removed the footnotes and had to do some search-n-replace to turn fancy quotes (and other special characters) into something multimarkdown understands.
Anyway. PDF, EPUB, and MOBI versions.
(If you want, I can toss you the scripts used to generate those).
Mind?! Are you kidding me? That's freaking awesome! (Though the only one I could view was the PDF, because I am unfamiliar with the other two formats, so I don't have a means to open them!) But that's pretty freaking cool. I love the image you put at the beginning of the story!
AnnElfwind wrote:I have to say, you fixed the plothole nicely. Though I still hope they can save Blaz before he's too far gone.
Coy's a well of information... Wonder what was his source apart from being in the dungeon for so long...
Amazing as always. :)
Can't wait for next chapter.
Hah! At the rate I am trying to write these, the next chapter will probably be soon! (Although tonight I am picking up my wife from the airport, so unless I can squeeze some writing in after work and before I go get here, it might have to wait!) and Saturday I am doing the Down Syndrome Buddy Walk!

As for Coy's information - in my head, the idea is - as a Ratling, he's been able to hide everywhere, kind of observe everything, since he's been down in Grimrock, never getting noticed. But I am sure Coy will tell me more when I write and develop it further. He seems like a talkative character in my head. :lol:

But I am very excited about how energized I am writing these little snip bits again! It's nice to be with these adventurers in my head again, speaking, wishing their story to be told.
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Sir Tawmis wrote:
Sol_HSA wrote:I hope you don't mind -
I ran the chapters you've posted here through my documentation toolchain for the fun of it. I removed the footnotes and had to do some search-n-replace to turn fancy quotes (and other special characters) into something multimarkdown understands.
Anyway. PDF, EPUB, and MOBI versions.
(If you want, I can toss you the scripts used to generate those).
Mind?! Are you kidding me? That's freaking awesome! (Though the only one I could view was the PDF, because I am unfamiliar with the other two formats, so I don't have a means to open them!) But that's pretty freaking cool. I love the image you put at the beginning of the story!
The other two are for e-readers, mobi for kindles and epub for others. If you want a preview of what it looks like, calibre can open them for viewing on a computer. Send me a private message or something if you want the scripts I used to generate those.
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Had some time during lunch to feel inspired...

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“So we’re supposed to believe you have survived down here for that long?” Silvertan hissed, his serpent like tongue, flickering.

“I was thrown down here when I was really young,” Coy replied. “I stowed away on a ship from the Isle of Nex to Nothamton. From there, I rode with some travelers into the Kingdom of Conwyn, where I eventually stopped in Ranwyn. I lived on the streets there until I was caught stealing. I was found guilty and thrown into Grimrock. I survived down here, like I said, by squeezing into small tunnels and grates, moving all around Grimrock. I saw things, learned things. That is, for example, how I knew about the tunnel that allowed me to get behind the Uggardian.”

“The what?” Tawmis asked, furrowing his brows.

“The fire guardian,” Coy replied. “They’re called Uggardians.”

“So now you think our mage is in danger?” Taren asked, his massive, minotaur muscles twitched.

“We all are,” Coy replied. “If the magic of Grimrock corrupts him, he will become incredibly powerful,” Coy thought back and the seared ice lizard, “He’s already displaying power boosts beyond his normal ability. It won’t be much longer now, if we don’t get him out of here.”

“Do you know a way out of here,” Silvertan asked, almost sarcastically, “since you have been here for so long?”

“There’s only three ways out of here,” Coy replied. “The first, and most common one is death.”

“That’s helpful,” Tawmis muttered sarcastically.

“The second way,” Coy’s eyes fell on Tawmis, “you go the route his parents took. You get the local authorities to pull you out. That’s not going to happen.”

“And the third?” Silvertan asked.

“The Undying One,” Coy replied.

“You say he’s real,” Tawmis said, lowering his arms. “So how is the Undying One going to help us get out of here? From everything you’ve said, he’s evil. I doubt he’s going to show us the door.”

“He won’t,” Coy replied. “But his magic could get us out of here. The teleporters scattered throughout these dungeons – like the one that your mage friend passed through – are efforts by the Undying One trying to create a portal that would lead outside of the mountain. The first mages cast a spell around Grimrock that should prevent the Undying One from doing that… but it’s been a long time, their spell is weakening, while the Undying One is growing stronger. It’s only a matter of time before he gets a portal open and out of here. If we can destroy him, and if your mage friend isn’t turned, he could channel the magic released by the Undying One and create a portal out of here.”

“So, we just need to beat some ancient being who, according to stories told, nearly destroyed the world? That’s it? We do that and we’re free?” Silvertan spat the words, chuckling sarcastically.

“Exactly,” Coy replied, “doesn’t seem so hard, right?” He returned Silvertan’s sarcasm with his own.

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Tawmis Sanarius – Human (Son of Contar Stoneskull and Yennica Whitefeather) - Warrior
Taren Bloodhorn – Minotaur - Warrior
Blaz’tik – Insectoid - Mage
Silvertan – Lizardman - Rogue
Coy – Ratling from the Isle of Nex – Rogue
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Love it. I love sarcasm and this chapter is filled with it at the end. :D

Also, I've been thinking of monsters that they have yet to encounter. I think, that that would be a slime, crowern, wywern, crab, I think, obviously the warden and then the mosquito thingy.
Out of these, I am certain they will meet the wardens when they reach the cube. But it would be interesting to see how they do against a slime...
Well, at least I hope I listed the monsters right... Maybe they encountered some of them already and I just forgot...

Well, anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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AnnElfwind wrote:Love it. I love sarcasm and this chapter is filled with it at the end. :D

Also, I've been thinking of monsters that they have yet to encounter. I think, that that would be a slime, crowern, wywern, crab, I think, obviously the warden and then the mosquito thingy.
Out of these, I am certain they will meet the wardens when they reach the cube. But it would be interesting to see how they do against a slime...
Well, at least I hope I listed the monsters right... Maybe they encountered some of them already and I just forgot...

Well, anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
They technically didn't "encounter" a Crowern, but it is mentioned as something they eat in the dungeon to survive. It's here, and later Taren mentions crowerns here. I haven't used Scavengers, but had Coy talk about how he escaped from them, when the adventurers first encountered him.

I think of the creatures in the game, I have not yet mentioned Giant Spiders, Slime, Shrakk Torr (giant freaking mosquitos!), and naturally the Wardens and the Undying One. I am going to try to squeeze them all in, but I may end up missing some at the rate the story is suddenly progressing! :lol:
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