Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Show off your Legend of Grimrock art, fiction, music or whatever!
Post Reply
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

AnnElfwind wrote:And the cube makes it's first appearance. :D
Indeed! And it was thanks to your inquiry a few posts ago in this thread, that I thought, "I really should make the Cube hurry up and appear, because LOG2 is almost out, and I'd like to move the story to the Isle of Nex somehow..."
AnnElfwind wrote: Oh, and was that fire creature an ugaridian? Or was it some other kind of fire creature? (Perhaps something from LoG2?)
I'm so looking forward to the next part! It's great!
Nope, not from LOG2, you had it right! It was indeed a Uggardian. Something I have been trying to do in these silly writings is show each monster from the Legend of Grimrock game.

And thank you for reading it and commenting on it! It's nice to know that folks take the time to read this stuff pouring out of my head, even better that they take the time to comment (nice fuel for the creative desire to continue!), and even better yet that you're enjoying (that is truly the most flattering part!)
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
AnnElfwind
Posts: 180
Joined: Thu Jan 09, 2014 3:26 pm
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by AnnElfwind »

Thanks for the reply.
And I have a question... That just now poped in my head. Is it possible you will incorporate some of the custom monsters made by fans into your story? I can totaly see them battling something like a slugomorg (from the missing heir mod) or possibly one of the mummies...
But regardless, I love the story! It's THE best Grimrock story I've had the chance to read. :)
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

AnnElfwind wrote:Thanks for the reply.
And I have a question... That just now poped in my head. Is it possible you will incorporate some of the custom monsters made by fans into your story? I can totaly see them battling something like a slugomorg (from the missing heir mod) or possibly one of the mummies...
But regardless, I love the story! It's THE best Grimrock story I've had the chance to read. :)
I haven't played ANY of the mods yet! My system tanked when I was near the end of LOG1 the first time. So I have actually, finally with some free time, replaying the game, so I can try to beat it. So I haven't had a chance to check out any mods! So for now, it will probably just be standard LOG monsters.

As for being the best Grimrock story - there's some other cool stories in here, but I think I am the only one who still continues writing. I think the others either finished, or remain incomplete.
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

Found myself inspired, with LOG2 coming out very soon to move the story forward, and here's what I can up with...

Image

Endless gears seemed to swirl and drift through the black void of space. Some connected, some disjointed, some spinning out of control, some rusted and broken.

Then there was a voice, “What is happening? A collective dream? Oh, I know you. I know what you seek.
Look for me down below, and I might help you.”

Blaz’tik sat up, his three hearts pounding furiously in his chest. This was the second time now, that he had found a small place to rest in the dungeon and been transported to the unusual gear-dream, for lack of a better word. It was now Blaz’tik regretted testing his theory if it had been a teleporter or an incinerator as Tawmis suggested, for he had been teleported away from the others – and none of the others seemed to have followed him through.

Not that he blamed them. They probably thought he had been reduced to ash by the shimmering lights.

That’s when the voice from the dream spoke into Blaz’tik’s mind yet again. “I can't hear you but I know you can hear me. I tried to talk to the other people that have been here before you. They were criminals but I sense that you I can trust.”

Blaz’tik stumbled backwards, “The –tic!- voice from my dream! How are you speaking to me?”

Blaz’tik waited for answer, and finally heaved a sigh of relief, assuming his imagination was getting the best of him, when suddenly he heard it again, “Are you still there? I know a way out but I can't make it there by myself. We need to work together. Descend towards the bottom of the mountain. We can meet there.”

Blaz’tik paled, even for an insectoid who was already nearly white. “I can hear you, but you can’t seem to hear me?”

He waited, and once again there was silence. Now more than ever, Blaz’tik felt very alone, and yet felt as if there were eyes now watching his every move. The very stone itself was alive, as he had once said, and it was somehow watching him – speaking to him.

Could the voice be the one he thought it to be? But that would be impossible. He was cast down here long, long ago. The stories of his imprisonment and creation, as well as his damnation, were all fabricated tales.

Blaz’tik moved cautiously through Grimrock, using his invisibility spell, now that he had the components for it, when needed, bypassing untold horrors that slithered around, waiting for something to feed upon. He found a small room with a steel door and locked himself inside of it to rest.

Once again as he drifted to sleep, space and time seemed to bend. Blackness swirled, mixed with crimson red, and once again, the spinning gears returned to his dream, preceding the arrival of the mysterious voice.

“I watched this dungeon being built. But they took it away from my people and twisted it. Filled it with traps and riddles. That is not how this place was meant to be. They make all the gates open and cause the traps to spring. It would be simple for them to stop us. Why will they not do it? Are we walking into another trap of theirs? Be careful. You are not the only ones held prisoner here. I, too, was cast down an abyss. I was bound with shackles. They keep all the machinery and mechanisms working in the dungeon.
All but one that sits in the tunnels below. It needs to be repaired so we can leave this place. Only a little bit further. You need to be careful. They live here and they will want to stop you. They fear you might undo their vision. The broken mechanism controls the Portal. From there we can escape. I am still too weak to move but I am glad you are making progress. I need to gather my strength so we can leave together. We can leave together. Leave together. Leave. Together.”

Blaz’tik awoke, once more, with his three hearts beating furiously.

“It’s –tic!- him,” Blaz’tik muttered. “It’s really him. The Undying One is real.”


Elsewhere in the dungeon…

Coy kneeled down, his Ratling eyes always looking for things to salvage. He picked up a small pouch and examined it, “Look,” he said, holding it up to the others.

“So you found a bag,” Tawmis muttered. “Does it have a magic key that gets us out of this place?”

“I know this magic bag,” Coy said, his nose twitching.

“Know it?” Tawmis asked.

“Yes, as in I gave it to the mage,” Coy said. He opened the bag and revealed flecks of grounded acorns. “By the looks of it, he may have passed through here.”

“So that means he wasn’t incinerated,” Taren said, with a nodding approval. “It will be good if we can find him again.”

“Preferably in one piece,” Tawmis added. “Can you tell which way he went?”

“By the looks of it,” Coy brushed the ground with his hand and looked a little down the hall where he saw a large, seared piece of flesh, “I’d say he went that way after melting the skin off whatever that thing was.”

Silvertan kneeled down, “An ice lizard,” he said, pulling back some of its burned flesh and seeing some of the ice blue scales, “or what’s left of it. I am surprised that our insectoid friend was able to use such a powerful spell,” Silvertan hissed. “He didn’t strike me as someone capable of such powerful magic.”

“It’s Grimrock,” Coy replied. “The magic flowing through the entire mountain that keeps the torches alive, the life stones, all of it is channeling into him, charging him like a battery.” The Ratling paused, “Soon he will be casting very powerful magic – until it either burns his body out, or corrupts him and he becomes one of the horrors that haunts these halls forever.”

“That’s,” Tawmis paused, “a cheery thought.”



___________________________________________________________________________
Tawmis Sanarius – Human (Son of Contar Stoneskull and Yennica Whitefeather) - Warrior
Taren Bloodhorn – Minotaur - Warrior
Blaz’tik – Insectoid - Mage
Silvertan – Lizardman - Rogue
Coy – Ratling from the Isle of Nex – Rogue
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
AnnElfwind
Posts: 180
Joined: Thu Jan 09, 2014 3:26 pm
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by AnnElfwind »

Well, I've read most of the stories here. And while some of them do seem that they could turn out really great, it's mostly those, that only have like... One chapter finished and the author never erally updated after that...

As for this chapter, Is Blaz the only one who can hear the cube? Or is he the only one so far?
Also, very dramatic ending. And now I can't wait to see if Blaz will become corrupt or if he be able to resist.
I also get the feeling that the others will try to revive the cube whilehe will try to stop them, cause he seems to know what it is...
Can't wait for next chapter. :)
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

AnnElfwind wrote:Well, I've read most of the stories here. And while some of them do seem that they could turn out really great, it's mostly those, that only have like... One chapter finished and the author never erally updated after that...
True, most did end shortly after they started. I think a lot of people got hyped about the game, when it first came out, started writing stories, but eventually their attention went elsewhere (perhaps more into the game, rather than writing, or just unto whatever the next new shiny was!)
AnnElfwind wrote: As for this chapter, Is Blaz the only one who can hear the cube? Or is he the only one so far?
So far, the way it's written, it's just Blaz'tik who hears the voice. As I wrote this chapter, because as I said earlier, I wanted to focus more on Blaz (who always just seemed to pop up to explain magical things in Grimrock) - give him more spotlight. I figured the explanation that Coy gives (about the magic coursing through Blaz since he's a magic user) is why Blaz is being picked out - the Undying One can sense his magic vibrating in Grimrock as something new, so he's latching onto Blaz and luring him. So that way Blaz remains the focus of the Undying One's attention. (And I thought it'd be interesting, if at some point I write the others finding Blaz, and he explains about hearing a voice that none of the others could hear - it'd make for some interesting dynamic. Will the rest of them think Blaz has lost his mind? That type of stuff!)
AnnElfwind wrote: Also, very dramatic ending. And now I can't wait to see if Blaz will become corrupt or if he be able to resist.
I also get the feeling that the others will try to revive the cube whilehe will try to stop them, cause he seems to know what it is...
Can't wait for next chapter. :)
We shall both see when it happens!

Again, thank you for being a faithful reader, and always taking the time to comment! I can not put into words how much I sincerely appreciate it!
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

Image

“You are close enough now,” the eerie voice whispered, startling Blaz’tik from his dream. “I don't have to wait for you to be asleep anymore,” the voice continued speaking to Blaz’tik’s mind. “A long time ago, they closed the Portal by breaking the mechanism. It is here, nearby. Find it.”

Blaz’tik leaned against the wall, trying to gain his bearings. He had heard rumors, stories, legends of the Undying One. Legends spoke of the Undying One, several thousand years ago, nearly destroying the entire world – so corrupt, vile and evil, driven beyond madness. Grimrock had been created to imprison him so long ago; but the magic of the Undying One seeped out through his imprisonment and began to infect all of Grimrock – altering the beasts that roamed it, changing the guardians to disfigured, unrecognizable creatures. In essence, Grimlock gained life – and the caverns were littered with creatures that became the enzymes of the blood, fighting off the infections that entered – the prisoners thrown down, to fight and try to survive.

“I know –tic!- who you are,” Blaz’tik said to no one in particular. “I know what you have –tic!- done. I can not set you free.”

“They destroyed the mechanism,” the voice replied. “They took it apart to keep the Portal closed. But it can still be mended, I know how. To reopen the Portal, you need to find the missing parts. There are four parts missing. Go.”

“You don’t–tic!- understand,” Blaz’tik repeated. “I can not help you.”

“I am the way to freedom,” the voice said. “I am your escape. The portal is the gate, I am the key.” After a moment, the voice continued, “They throw all their scrap metal and old parts down the pits. We may find what we need here.”

Blaz’tik wasn’t even sure if the voice of what he believed to be the Undying One could even hear him – or if it was a one way communication. Still, if the voice was speaking the truth – if there was no way out without helping the Undying One – it would explain why no one ever escaped. Perhaps they all gave their life, once they realized the only way out was helping the Undying One escape.

Blaz’tik felt his fingertips tingle. He looked down and saw crackles of energy weaving between his fingertips. The magic of Grimrock was literally coursing through his entire body – energizing him, making him feel more alive than he has ever before. He had felt it from the moment they had been thrown into the dungeon – how the magic had been drawn to him. Each time they went deeper into the dungeon, each time they got closer, Blaz’tik suspected, to the Undying One, somewhere far below, the magic around him seemed to become stronger and stronger, also making him more powerful. Blaz’tik couldn’t help but recall the Goromorg that they had encountered; the one that had nearly ripped the soul from Tawmis’ chest.

“Thousands of years old,” Blaz’tik had explained, after that encounter. “Once believed to be human, the Designers – the First Mages – obsessed with magic, sold their –tic!- very sanity and souls, to improve and learn –tic!- and become better Mages. It is said –tic!- that they made a pact with a ‘Dark God’ that –tic!- bestowed these powers upon them and supposed –tic!- changed them in its image. They are, without a doubt, -tic!- the most powerful Mages in existence, but the cost –tic!- of magic was … what you saw. They –tic!- no longer appear human. They –tic!- emanate that fear –tic!- aurora, because there is nothing human – it’s literally the –tic!- magic within them flowing outward, seeking to drain any and all –tic!- magic it senses!” (You can re-read that over here: viewtopic.php?p=61396#p61396)

Blaz’tik looked at his hands again. He saw the magic coursing through his fingertips.

And he couldn’t help but wonder – if he did not find a way to escape – would he suffer the same fate as the Goromorg? Would he eventually become so twisted and vile by the corrupt magic he could feel beating through his body. Would he become obsessed with the dark magic? Would he roam these halls, seeking to drain the life and magic of everyone who was thrown down here?

And for that brief moment, fear took over Blaz’tik. He closed his eyes, and prayed, before speaking the next words, “I will help you escape…”


____________________________________________________________________________
Tawmis Sanarius – Human (Son of Contar Stoneskull and Yennica Whitefeather) - Warrior
Taren Bloodhorn – Minotaur - Warrior
Blaz’tik – Insectoid - Mage
Silvertan – Lizardman - Rogue
Coy – Ratling from the Isle of Nex – Rogue
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
AnnElfwind
Posts: 180
Joined: Thu Jan 09, 2014 3:26 pm
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by AnnElfwind »

Oooh! A cliffhanger (Like there were non before...)!

Well, that aside, I have a question. If noone ever escaped before, does this mean, that this takes place before Yenica and Contar and their group? I think you said that they were TAwmis' parrents, right? So it has me confused... Or is it something like... He was born and then they were thrown there sometime later and actually died in there?
The way I see it is that this is either a plothole or I'm not understanding this properly...
So if you could explain this little detail, I would be grateful.

And as always, amazing job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Though I'm awaiting your reply even more eagerly. :D
User avatar
Sir Tawmis
Posts: 989
Joined: Mon Jul 30, 2012 8:15 am
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by Sir Tawmis »

AnnElfwind wrote: Oooh! A cliffhanger (Like there were non before...)!
I do so love a good cliff hanger! :lol:
AnnElfwind wrote: Well, that aside, I have a question. If noone ever escaped before, does this mean, that this takes place before Yenica and Contar and their group? I think you said that they were TAwmis' parrents, right? So it has me confused... Or is it something like... He was born and then they were thrown there sometime later and actually died in there?
The way I see it is that this is either a plothole or I'm not understanding this properly...
So if you could explain this little detail, I would be grateful.
Correct! In the story I said that Tawmis was Yenica and Contar's son. And that there was a rumor that they had escaped, but never proven. (So their fate remains unknown). I believe it's Silvertan who had mentioned it, saying he knew who Tawmis was and who his parents were. (I may need to go back and double check myself!)
AnnElfwind wrote: And as always, amazing job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Though I'm awaiting your reply even more eagerly. :D
Rest assured, I am more excited to always read your comments, as they spur me on to keep doing this!
Define ... 'Lost.' Neverending Nights - The Neverwinter Machinima that WILL make you laugh!
Also read: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance here on the forum! Check out the site I made for Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.
User avatar
AnnElfwind
Posts: 180
Joined: Thu Jan 09, 2014 3:26 pm
Contact:

Re: Legend of Grimrock: Destiny's Chance.

Post by AnnElfwind »

So, the way I understand it now, is Blaz thinks noone ever escaped because Yenica and Contar's fate is unknown, right?
By the way, does Tawmis know what happened to them, or is he in the dark too?
Oh, and I hope Blaz will not turn to the "dark side". :)
Post Reply