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Sir Tawmis wrote: It’d been a long time since I have added, so this story was a little longer than usual. Hopefully still enjoyable for anyone still reading.

Thanks for still continuing... I'm waiting for more 8)

So I would be more than happy to see something you wrote; and give my (un)professional opinion on it and any suggestions, I might have! Sorry for the long pause on the replies here. Tried to find time to write something, but failed -- when there was time, there was not enough will... I have ideas, ...

Thank you! Finding these two characters a little more interesting? With these little bits? I plan to do the alchemist and the other barbarian next. Yes, IMHO this offers a good starting point to start growing the characters in and relationships when thrown into a group that none of them wanted to f...

Ahh.
Another part.. Thanks! Keep it up..

Sir Tawmis wrote: A large map is available on my site here to view.

Oh. That map is beautiful!

And thanks for making my wishes a reality...

So, we have a few stories with the "new" team of characters - any thoughts on them? Things you like? Dislike? Want to know more about? The idea of having two teams on the island is very interesting. I like it! I would be very interesting to know a bit more about the backgrounds of the new...

I know a few of you have replied that you're enjoying it - and made it clear - but, I guess - as a writer, I am always amazed when someone enjoys what I do. No reason to be amazed; A good story is good. Give yourself a bit of credit. I mean, in a world where people read less and less fiction, you'v...

Hmm. I wonder what is going to happen when they face Coy's old "friends" (=the other ratlings) on the island. That might be an interesting encounter. Looking forward to your next updates. (which are apparently coming more often than once a week). I need to increase my frequency of update c...

I'm away for two weeks, and there are suddenly two story updates! Wonderful!

And the writing is as good as ever... Keep them coming!

I do need to set time aside to get back to this... work has been chaotic, to say the least, with the axe swinging wildly with lay offs... so I have kept busy and kept my head down... I have been looking at this forum about once or twice a month to check for a new part to the story... I was really e...